Comments : My Saviour

  • 19 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    Awwww Toni that's a brilliant poem. I'm so happy for you, you really do deserve to win this fight and I'm with you every step of the way and for all the ones afterwards too! I hope everything's okay! This poem's amazing I'm so proud of you for writing it.
    Take good care of yourself munchkin.
    All my love,
    Laura.

  • 19 years ago

    by Oliver Stevenson

    eeeeeeeeeeeeeee :D LOVE YOU LOVE YOU!!!!! EEEEEEE:D WICKED POEM HUN :D:D:D:D more than 5!!!!!!!! lol love ya!!! xxxxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Wow, lol, yes that is a hopeful poem. A very good one might I add.

    My favorite stanza is:

    Yes the future looks scary…
    At the moment it looks so bleak
    But I must not let that put me off
    Happiness I must seek

    You're incredible Toni. Just thought I'd let you know. I think that its wonderful that you're your own savior. That's good. Don't depend so heavily on anyone else to make things right. Thanks for sharing Toni!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    So amazing and well written as always....And I really loved that it was a hopeful poem, you have seen the light!! Keep writing!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Thanku! x

  • 19 years ago

    by deadnalone

    awesome hun! keep dat inside u coz i no u can make it, its awesome as they always are and flows effortlessly as they always do, it rocks, in short terms!!!
    luv it, luv u,
    take care hun,
    ellie
    xooxox

  • 19 years ago

    by confusion

    so full of hope! :D gave a real positive feeling from reading it, another superb poem. the lines

    And sure there’s people who've helped…
    Who've brought me light to see
    But I realise now in my darkest hour
    My saviour can only be me

    really seemed to stand out to me, but it was all amazing. keep your head up :)

    luv lu -x-x-x-