Mist

by Toni   Mar 13, 2005


Take down my broken shell
Repair it if you like
This misty air has caught my breath
The light here seems so bright

Whirl my solid edge…
Into something smooth
Do not speak a single word
Do not even move

This silence here is soothing…
Upon a tired mind
Take care to fasten all the ties
Don’t leave me behind

Break this hardened mould of mine
Carve me into something new
Cleanse away this dirt inside
And let my soul renew

Blow the clouds away from me
Away into the distance
I am here for only you
There won’t be any resistance

These lights twinkle fast…
They’re lighting up my eyes
Sparking up my very soul
The dark in which it lies

Touch my broken skin…
With those words so sweet and pure
Lay me down beside you now
You’re what I’m living for

And when the shadows move…
Across our souls tonight
Remember as we fade away
Tonight, you made it right

Any comments would mean a lot! x

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  • 19 years ago

    by confusion

    the idea behind the poem really worked well, yet another outstanding write!! how do you do it?? :) keep it up and take care always

    luv lu -x-x-x-x-

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Thanku every1! xxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by deadnalone

    awesome hun, great imagery and it was just fantastic, excellent to say the least,
    lotsa luv always,
    im always here,
    ellie
    xoxox

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Thanks all x

  • 19 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    Amazing poem bumweed. Love it.

    Take care munchkin.
    All my love,
    Laura.