Wow! i especially liked

In this forest of delusions
I see so many things
Dark angels bleeding
Through their broken wings

thoughtthis poem was brilliant hun *hug* hpoe you feel better soon xxx

aw, thanks Oliver. I'm glad you liked it!! I read it to my mom and she was criticing the entire thing lol. I felt so stupid. uh oh, gtg. lyl bye.

~Sierra

lol bye hun xxx i thought it was amazing anyway :D

i'm back lol. Thanks! lol. Isn't it late in England right now? lol.

wonderful poem!

Thank you Andrea xxxx

Wow. Really most times i'm very amazed at how you can leave me speachless.

Among these angels are many men
Humans who, too, are bleeding
Through open wrists of sacrifice
On their knees they are pleading

That was just so amazingly good. I mean, the whole thing was breathtaking but that one stanza really made my eyes pop. Brilliant.
-A

Lol, you really made me smile there, thanks!!!!!!

Through open wrists of sacrifice was my favorite line out of them all, so I'm glad you chose that stanza as your favorite!!! Thanks!!

great write..i like it =) thanks for the comments...i hope you keep writing, u seem real good at it =) xxxx <33

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

thank you Mortalidaga. :-D. Glad you read it. You really didn't have to, I was just asking you too!! ol, thanks neways.

hey girl, great poem, sorry we haven't spoke in ages, been soooooo busy!!!!! hosting japanese girls yay! lol talk soon x

HOLY WOW, YOU POETIC GENIUS, YOU!!! seriously... why do you even waste the time to read my poems when you have masterpieces right here? this is an incredible poem, sierra, honestly... you should submit it for the weekly contest! i'm SURE you will get voted a billion and one times! oh, boy, you're awesome, you know that? love you!!! i have to go, tho...grr! darn, i dont wanna leave... oh, well, i'll talk to you later! love you to the moon and back, sierra! byeeeeeee!!!
*Zac*

AWW!!!!!!!!! :*-(, MY ZAC IS GONE??? COME BACK SOON!!! I'll miss you!! And I don't know how to submit it for the weekly thing. I've never known how. Thanks though, I'm touched you liked it. And I read yours because I'm not conceited with my poetry. I enjoy reading other people's poetry, and think about it, if i hadn't, then you and I wouldn't even know it each other!!! Lol, thanks for the compliments, Zac. I love you too!!! To the moon and back and until this earth shall fall beneath my feet. Bye Zac.

~Sierra

sry i been a bad friend but i havent been on alot but i love this poem very good

thanks!! I missed you babe!

:-D!!! I def. think that this one is my darkest poem yet, so that means I'm EXTREMELY proud of this one. :-D. I liked your reaction a lot, lol, I smiled!! Hehe... love you lots!!

~Sierra

its alright babe. I'm sorry your bro was annoying I know what thats like i hve 3 of them....grrrrrr....... lol!! me like poem 3.

You are so incredibly eloquent in your wording
I adore your poetry
whole heartedly
I think this may be my favorite.
I Love it so