Comments : Final Breath

  • hey gurl this is really good!
    xoxox ~Sarah~

  • 19 years ago

    by broken angel

    I used to be a cutter, and this is what I always dreamed about. Showing my parents how little they knew about me. You are truly gifted, it's like you wrote down my thoughts I once had. If you aren't too busy reading all the commments you will soon have, you wanna swing by my page and read "Please Save Him" I think you might be able to relate, since you did write this poem. Thanx a million. You're so awesome

  • 19 years ago

    by Taylor

    great poem! i love it! you're poems are so amazing! i love everone of them that i read! this is so beautiful and sad but so easy to relate to! keep it up mya!

    Love, Taylor

  • 19 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    Auuuuu :( Girl , this was so painful to read. I am hoping you are okay - Loving you.

    **I am putting you on my favourites if that is okay**?

    >.Kalah

  • 19 years ago

    by Amba

    wow hey, this poem was so sad, i hope erything for you is ok, you are a very talented poet, so keep on writeing!
    lots of love xo bam
    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Lindsay C

    awesome job! loved it...sad and emotional!

  • 19 years ago

    by Beebee

    very deep 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Beebee

    Awww