Please Save Him

by broken angel   Mar 14, 2005


Darkness falls upon his face
The night provokes his fear
He lets out a silent scream
No one will ever hear

His hands are cut and bleeding
His eyes are cold and gray
The memories burn in his mind
For years and years they play

He can't fit in, he has no friends
At lunch he sits alone
He feels no happiness or joy
Love's a thing he's never known

A teenage boy in a world too cold
Did it have to be this way?
He never did anything wrong to justify what classmates say

He wants to cry but knows he can't
He never does wha he should
So he cuts his skin and his own blood drops, just like tears would

Misery consume his life
He feels there's no where to run
So he finds comfort within the cold
Steel body of a gun

He hands are clamy and his eyes closed
The barrel pointed at his head
With a simple pull of the trigger
His life reaches its end

A poor young angel with shattered wings
His body on the cold tile floor
God was watching to see if you'd care
It shouldn't happen anymore

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    omg great poem, really sad but you wrote it beautifully. i like angel poems so it's cool that you can tie that in like that. thanks for your comment!

    ~ PLP~ Lil slam~

  • 19 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    omg i got the chills.....brilliant poem, yet so very sad....keep em' coming =) ~much love~

    -brittnay- ((5/5))

  • 19 years ago

    by Bitten by frost

    another masterpiece, keep on writting, make me miserable (5/5)

  • 19 years ago

    by ~VaMpIrE KiSsEs~

    Hey... I love this poem... ur right.. I can relate to it. Thanks so much for the comment. U are very gifted writer! Keep up the Great work. I added you to my favorites! 5/5!

    Love bunchez
    Mya

  • That was sooooooo good!! You have to keep righting hun...your poems are soo good!!
    Katie