I absolutley love this, i felt as if i were in the poem myself, and it really takes a good writer to do that you are amazing!!! hang in there
as always 5/5
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Beautiful, beautiful work.There were so many lines in this piece that I admired, some including the first stance which I must praise how you stated "And cradled it within my hate" displaying how you dealt with loss of faith, and "I waited alone with my broken heart
And kissed away my last night"
I really loved that image you portrayed, it was beautiful. I also loved the image you created with,
"Looked up to the raining skies
And let the rain strip me bare"
And
"And as the heavens began collapsing"

This poem was dark and tragic yet displayed with a glimmer of insperation at the end. I loved the last stance,
"She lifted me from the darkness
And gave me wings so I could fly
For the first time in my faded life
An angel gave me reason enough;
To try."
Beautiful work, excellent job

Amazing piece...very inspirational! This piece took me on a journey of many emotions as I read it! Definitely one of your best....Holly

I love the ending.

Lv A,x

The poem was flawless and beautiful. The flow was incredible and I just loved it.

This part:
And as I lost my grip on faith
i would change to:
--as I lost my grip on faith--

I know you won't, but it just helped me to read it better when i placed it like that in my head. Other than that, you have an awesome poem on your hands. Well written.

Great Vocabulary you have btw.

5/5
~Stephen White