A very skillful write with the powerful truth

A very powerful poem. You really captured the essence of the painful truth and our worlds faults. I thorougly enjoyed this peice keep up the good writing.
awesome job as always 5/5
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A wonderful piece to express your opinion and views of what war has brought onto our nation.
You really displayed the pain and sorrow with great detail to the emotional scars, and lack of understanding as to what could be worth such pain.
I really admired these lines,
"The trouble of war, the truth, reality, we fight off with waving hands"
they create a picture of peace craving souls begging for halt to this burden only to be refused.
My favorite lines were,
"When shattered teeth from broken bodies try to tell their story
Maybe then we'll see that all the pain isn't worth our craved glory."
Well done