Invader

by FTS Miles   Mar 14, 2005


So vivid is the wild flower,
shocking white against
lush green grass as only
early summer sun can enflame.

The mountains occupy horizon,
a crown of might and diamant
upon the verdant plains and
risen over cold rivers of clarity.

The bees are daring and
precocious now warmed
from winter's frigid death
and even spring's chill wind.

The hare dashes wildly from
midst the enshrouding bush
bejeweled with the succulence
of bountiful berries ripe and ready.

The glory of our lands now
surrounds me with the piquant
sweet ambrosia of languor
that I would sip with thee.

Yet we pursue this charge
to lord and priestess,
lovers, guardians, friends,
mounts pounding beside mounts.

Your eyes become intent on mine,
time and hooves flowing to stillness,
my world, my divine spark,
alone cherished in your eyes…

Until the final screams of
allied fury rally the bleed
of sieving moments for
our interwoven skeins.

As thunder in the valleys
we smite the invading horde,
dancing blithely the sanguine
precipice of righteous battle.

With each feathered barb
I chastising gift to enemy,
I but ask the Gods to grant
I may be with you another day.

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  • 19 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    Amilo, thank you! That was exactly--I mean EXACTLY--what I was trying to evoke in imagery and tone. You just made my day! Thank you!

    And thank you Gemma and Fred for your comments.

    BTW, good to see you back around, Gemma! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Amilo

    Wow... the poem begins with amazing imagery - each line is another vibrant stroke upon a painter's canvas, and by the middle of the poem, you have finished work of art. In this line:

    "Your eyes become intent on mine,
    time and hooves flowing to stillness,
    my world, my divine spark,
    alone cherished in your eyes…

    I can imagine two lovers mounted upon horses, charging down into the valley, ready for battle. With this, you've added a varnish of emotion to the poem as well..

    The last line and first lines, I must say, are my favorites. The first, so eye-catching, and the last, so resounding in tone and meaning.

  • 19 years ago

    by Gemma Sinead Hayward

    As intense and brilliant as always....