Comments : Let Me Fade

  • 19 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    Beautiful...just too beautiful...you write really well...take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>>

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    THank you all.....Friends, I changed the first one, sorry I'm from the South, I really would never know proper English if it hit me in the face lol but I didn't change the second one, i liked it as is but thank you for the suggestions:)

  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Heather...it was great!! HunBun made me come read it because she said it was being ripped apart for no reason. I loved it! ;)

  • 19 years ago

    by ºCrimsonTearsº

    amazing !!!! loved the last line, i can totally relate

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    ~ :-|
    ~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

  • 19 years ago

    by Matthew Lee

    Hey Heather. This was a really wonderful poem you wrote here. Sad but sometimes very true when it comes to love. I'm still trying to understand it. Love is something that'll never be learned fully. Love yah, bye...

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    i love it!!

    <33

    (in a very good mood)

    =) smiles (=

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Heather, Beautiful, and awesome job. I'm Southern also and this is the way we speak. Go Southern Girl, Your talent is overwhelming. Loved it. hugs, lol, *Ann*

  • 19 years ago

    by Bizarre

    i dont really know what to say. so i'm just gonna tell you what i tell you a lot, another great one!

  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Beautifully penned with such sadness! Very well written~Holly

  • 19 years ago

    by *liZ*

    :) 5/5 you write so well I just love reading your poems because I know they will be awesome! :)