love it, wow. what a wonderful poem, i really love it!! |
wow a brilliant poem, I loved it!!! I totally relate to what you are saying, keep up the good work!! |
by Brookeღ
Wow so intense exellent job I can feel the hurt when reading this poem. Loved it! |
by Andrea
wow! amazing poem! very catching and well written! i hope that you are okay, by reading this poem its kinda obvious your not but i hope you'll feel better. *hugs* |
by Bizarre
wow, this is an awesome poem. very very good. i understand what you're saying. this is just an awesome poem. |
by Hoover
Good Poem!!! I can relate 100%, |
Hey awesome poem!! i reallyyy liked it..you have a lot of talent..great job..im sorry your feeling this way..i hope everything works out.. |
by Natalie84
If this poem is really about you remember that He hear's what you're saying! Keep your head up!! Awesome poem!!! 5/5 |
Thank you all for your concern, but this poem is not specifically about me. I have felt like this at times yes, but it is not about me personally. I am not a teenager. I am 24 years old as well..not 14. :) Thank you all for your kind words and comments though. |
by Ashlynn
Kool poem. I like it. |
by ~*Ley*~
sorry to be anti christ here, but in my opinion, god doesn't help anybody. but if that is what you beleive, than keep faith and eventually he will save you from your peryl and your life will get better. life cant be crap forever. evetually it has to bounce back up. |
I don't see why your poems aren't rated higher than they are. You seem to be able to make anything and everything work in your poems...I really admire your gift. Keep writing these touching poems and sharing, please :) |
by rachyBBY
Thats a very good poem, you're such a great writer. one day maybe you should get a book published ? im sure it would sell good. but i really liked ur poem =]] 5/5 |
by Gizmo
I don't believe in god but it was a very good poem. |