by Amilo Mar 14, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
I intend this poem to be an emotional poem of sorts, and did not concentrate on rhyme, but left the words to lead themselves. It was orginally a 5-minute work which I left in the corner, then took it out and edited it. |
the poem flowed beautifully |
by No Motiv?
this poem is brilliant. beautiful job [and for once, I actually mean it when I comment like this]. 5/5. |
by Angeline
I liked the way you made childhood a person, and everything else....wonderfull:) |
by pinkalias
I really liked it. I have to admit though the title through me off alot. I thought it was going to be a simple stated poem considering the title was blunt and sounded too direct, but I was proven wrong after reading the piece. |
by chavii
amilo it was awesome u depict life so beautifully in words. |