Comments : Fate of a dreamer

  • 19 years ago

    by EoB

    Whoever reads this, should know that this poem can be found by another "poet" on this site, named Hailie, who has been stealing at least three of my poems: The lady of the night, fate of a dreamer, and The crossroads (which i originally named Dead End). i can prove that these are my poems. The sad thing is that "Fate of a dreamer, for instance has been given 87 all-positive comments, but They all believe that she has written it. I am so pissed of right now. You can find my poems on "teenpoetry.studentcenter.org" if you search for Enslavement_of_beauty", which is my username there. Thank you. Help me defeat such thiefs as hailie

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    well done to the real writer of this poem, fantastic

  • 19 years ago

    by happy days

    this is such a good poem, i hope you get as much recognition for it as Hallie did. i love all your poems, keep it up xxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Misstress

    yep, sometimes our best not is not enough.
    everythings happen for a reason.
    dreams moves us.
    this poem moves me.

  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    This poem was awesome and beautiful. I think I commented on it when i still thought it was Hailie's, but now that i know you're the true owner, i wanna congratulate you for winning one of the weekly contests with this poem, and it was very beautiful. 5/5, i can't give you anything less. I totally loved it.
    SatuzKa

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    This poem is so beautisul and well written...I can't believe that she stole you peom, well then I'm glad that I never commented it before.....This comment is for you only, the true writer!!! Heard she stole frome others as well, cant believe it....Well, you have talent girl, just keep writing!!! *hugs*

  • 19 years ago

    by EoB

    Thank you very much.......oh, one more thing.... Last time I checked I wasn¨t a girl:P But anyways, thank you=)

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Wups sorry....my mistake!!! I was just wondering, what ever happened to Hallie??? I can see that she is still posting poems......Sorry again, but i would have found out in a minute, cause I'm going to read you other poems!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by EoB

    No one really knows what has happened to her. She is still here, it seems, not that I mind, but she hasn¨t given any apology or something, which I think she ows me.

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    Great poem... thanks for your comment =) It really meant a lot to me.. I voted a 5 for this one! Please check out my poems "there goes my heart" and "the silver moon sparkling" it would mean a lot.. take care

  • 19 years ago

    by xxangelchicxx2000

    wonderful poem 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    wow wow... very good.. I loved this one =) 5/5!!! hugs

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    this is a masterpiece

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    This poem right here shows the talent that u have! It's to bad that someone else stole ur work! U are the one with the talent! Once someone steals from others I lose respect for that poet! I know at first no one believed u and I was one and I am so sorry! I appreciate ur work! Keep posting I really enjoy your poems! I usaully don't comment because they are so good I really don't know what else to say! Take Care! Brooke

  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    This is beautiful. Awesome. I've commented on it before but i can say it 1000 times, it's beautiful, so unique and so...touching. Beautiful. I can't say anything less and i'm not trying to sugarcoat my opinion but i truly love this poem, you have so much talent! Keep writing! 5/5 and NO less!
    Satuxxa

  • U Worded It Like Gold, I Felt That It Flowed Very Well Together 5.0! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by A Broken Bleeding Soul

    Once again... another great poem. You are a very talented writer. Keep it up 5/5

    ~ Tina

  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    This was a good poem it really flowed well and had a clear message to it great job...

  • 19 years ago

    by NoPatience

    hey i think i might have commented on this exact poem from haily. im really sorry about the whole "stealing" thing. keep up the good work and get back what is yours!!!
    p.s
    im sorry that i commented on hers. but this is a great poem whoever wrote it is talented!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    This is such a beautiful poem. I love it. Especially this part:

    But I am a dreamer, and once I had peace.
    I did feel that longing, but one day it ceased.
    The life that I dreamt of was the one i possessed.
    And all I would bleed for was for her to feel blessed.

    Great poem. Keep it up.

    Love,
    Tiff