Being forgotten

by xxangelchicxx2000   Mar 14, 2005


I think i am going insane
From the pain
Crying for help
Please give me a break
I need to live
Don't want to die
Maybe i"ll be happy
In the days ahead
But right now
My life is shitty
And i feel creepy
Feel like i am dying
in peoples hearts and minds
My worst fear is coming true
And i don't know what to do
I don't want to live alone
I would rather die
They say that they would be here
But when i need them the most
They are out partying
They say that i should go with them
But in there hearts
They are not really concerned
They don't know that
I am dying slowly
Being forgotten
Like an old memory
I am bearing this pain
Going insane
Is there any one who cares
Please save me
Just keep me fresh
in your hearts and memories~!!~

please read it means a Lot to me~!!~

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  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    This poem seemed more like a cry for help sad but I think if you would take a more solid stand on this like what you are going to do with the situation it would be alot better read. But nice try...

  • 19 years ago

    by Timothy B

    a helping hand is always good, aslong as we accept it. You will find someone who will love you and care for you no mather what. for now, just hold on.
    nicely written.
    tnx for commenting

  • 19 years ago

    by Timothy B

    a helping hand is always good, aslong as we accept it. You will find someone who will love you and care for you no mather what. for now, just hold on.
    nicely written.
    tnx for commenting

  • 19 years ago

    by Timothy B

    It's a beautifull poem Nida, sad, but still beautifull in a unike way. you seem like a nice person. Someone out there must care.

  • 19 years ago

    by Carmen

    it started out really good, but kinda ended weird. i think if you edit it a bit, it'd be perfect. still good, nonetheless! just work on the rhyming

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