i wasnt sure where this was leadin at the beginning but all came together in the end which was great. altho think the poem would benefit from being more discriptive...sorry tahts just my opinion...take care
xxxLoUxxx

thats really sad...:(
5/5

it started out really good, but kinda ended weird. i think if you edit it a bit, it'd be perfect. still good, nonetheless! just work on the rhyming

It's a beautifull poem Nida, sad, but still beautifull in a unike way. you seem like a nice person. Someone out there must care.

a helping hand is always good, aslong as we accept it. You will find someone who will love you and care for you no mather what. for now, just hold on.
nicely written.
tnx for commenting

a helping hand is always good, aslong as we accept it. You will find someone who will love you and care for you no mather what. for now, just hold on.
nicely written.
tnx for commenting

This poem seemed more like a cry for help sad but I think if you would take a more solid stand on this like what you are going to do with the situation it would be alot better read. But nice try...