Yeah, what are we living for??? I really don't know, but I love reading your poems, so stay alive girl, I need you....I need some one to relate to and talk to...

~ very sad and negative view on life
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

i like this...the way you express yourself is really good. i wish you so much love and good feelings instead of all this sadness. i want you to be happy. *hugs*

Very good. The rhythm. the beat and the words all go together perfectly. This really is good. You're on my favorites, and I'm definetely taking a look at the rest of your poems.