by My Obsεssion Mar 14, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Drink the spirit, take it within |
by Tara
Very well written....the line about porcelain complexion turning blue is my favorite part of the poem (you've got a great way with words!) 5/5! |
by Dorotea©
Wow, i really liked both of the parts, and in my opinion they are both equally good. Good job, this one had very good word usage. Thanks for commenting on my poem, and also thanks for telling me when this part came, i enjoyed reading it! 5/5 for sure! |
this part's way better than one, both good, but i like this one bunches more...loved the word usage:) |
by Amit
~ very very nice write, excellent poem |
by Andrea
wow....i love this. very dark writing, great work! |