Metaphorical Murder: The Killer

by My Obsεssion   Mar 14, 2005


Drink the spirit, take it within
Taste the fruit of this laborious sin
Won a round of the game impossible to win
Treading on ice far too thin

Modern day reaper minus the scythe
Parent of grief, ender of strife
Self-proclaimed god by hilt of knife
Right hand of death, left hand of life

Thrive off the suffering, live off the pain
Part of the reasoning has gone quite insane
Oppressing the joy, struggling to restrain
Control long gone, struggling is in vain

Inevitable soon became too true
Broke the ice, fell on through
Gone and done what wasn’t planned to do
Porcelain complexion now turned blue

Braved the coaster, fell off the ride
Control long lost over happenings inside
Between want and need it was hard to decide
But true self within you cannot hide

**if you haven't already, read part one The Victim**

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  • 19 years ago

    by Tara

    Very well written....the line about porcelain complexion turning blue is my favorite part of the poem (you've got a great way with words!) 5/5!
    -Tara

  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    Wow, i really liked both of the parts, and in my opinion they are both equally good. Good job, this one had very good word usage. Thanks for commenting on my poem, and also thanks for telling me when this part came, i enjoyed reading it! 5/5 for sure!
    SatuzKa

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    this part's way better than one, both good, but i like this one bunches more...loved the word usage:)
    5/5
    with love,
    Heather

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    ~ very very nice write, excellent poem
    ~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    wow....i love this. very dark writing, great work!