wow....i love this. very dark writing, great work!

~ very very nice write, excellent poem
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

this part's way better than one, both good, but i like this one bunches more...loved the word usage:)
5/5
with love,
Heather

Wow, i really liked both of the parts, and in my opinion they are both equally good. Good job, this one had very good word usage. Thanks for commenting on my poem, and also thanks for telling me when this part came, i enjoyed reading it! 5/5 for sure!
SatuzKa

Very well written....the line about porcelain complexion turning blue is my favorite part of the poem (you've got a great way with words!) 5/5!
-Tara