JESSIE! this is NOT crap!!! its such a good poem!!!! ITS AWESOME! i love it!! i dont know how you can say this is crap! but anyway..im really sorry that you feel this way... just remember im ALWAYS here for you..no matter what....and please feel better..
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xX-Katherine-Xx

Hey hun...this is amazing...it so doesnt blow!!...i can relate to this...but you know wut...i know you can handle it...you have a lot of strength..keep ur head up girl...take care...great poem!!
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Hey*~*
That was amazing and really deep. That's not any where near blowing.
Thanks for commenting my poem, too. And you have a lot of talent. Keep up the writing, and you can handle the pain. Just stay strong like you have been!
XxXxX
Robin**

im speechless, this poem is amazing

this poem is wonderful. it doesnot below~!!~ i love it. keep it up^***^

thanks for reading and commenting on my poem. it means a lot to me~!~
thanks
luv
nida

are you kidden me?! this poems awesome i can relate to it in everyway I cant believe someone as good as yourself would even bother to take a glimpse at one of my poems but i thank you so much for that and i will read much more of yours this was great dont even put it down! i know how you feel cause i feel the same way but for some reason i dont act on those feelings ur right there is something within holding us back but you must let it hold u back

it was good. I really liked it and it doesnt blow. but everyone always says that your your worst critic. Nice job on your poem

it dont blow! lol, its realy really good, keep your head up, great job!

I have to disagree with you, Jesse. This poem kicks some serious ass. It takes talent to write a poem like this; feel proud of yourself.

this soooooooooooooooooooooo doesnt blow.....it was amazing...for some reason i feel like i think like you, as far as poetry is concerned, i dont know why! please check out my poems!

This is great, wow, I am amazed, well done
I loved this part
"I'm looking in the mirror
My eyes are soaking wet
What could be holding me back?
Why am I not dead yet?"

your poems are awesome :D well done

thanks everyone! :o)

Wow, this so does not blow! It's the opposite of blow.. it sucks.. well wait.. that don't work either lol.. Well, it's awesome anyway! I love it. Iknow exactly how you feel! Keep it up hun.

Love,
Tiff

wow!!! that was great!! good JOb!!

this poem dosen't blows actually its very good

it really doesn't blow chick!

Hey Homie, Thiz iz really good. Itz tight. I can relate. Keep writing, ur a skilled writer. It' does not blow. A lot of people liked it. Thanx for putting it up. 5/5 Peaze.