Comments : My life

  • 19 years ago

    by Barbara Jean

    I am treated as if I am not even there,

    I speak and no one hears,

    I stare and no one sees,

    Its not like they would care,

    Even if out came tears,

    I HAVE A POEM SIMILAR TO THAT.. WEIRD!! ONLY THAT PART.. ANYWAYS, THANKS FOR THE TITLE!! I GIVE YOU A 5 ON THIS!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Alexandra C

    Wow, this was superb! I really liked the way you compared things. It's like you put into rhyme scheeme what I think about all the time! Wow, nice.
    -Ali

  • 19 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    It had great meaning!?!
    and the flow just fitted...i'd give it a 5 for meaning and bout a 4 for flow...all in all your getting a 5 well done.

    x)