I'll Do This On My Own

by Toni   Mar 14, 2005


So much for the positive streak:
Tonight I cry alone
People never stick to their word
I’ll do this on my own

No more relying on people’s support
They always seem to withdraw it
Parents more bothered about themselves
They’re empty yet full of sh*t

No more asking for help and advice
Because people don’t want to know
But that’s okay, that’s just fine that
They don’t care why I’m low

People care for their feelings alone
A hand’s too much to lend
From now I’ll rely on only me
I’ll be my own best friend

See, loneliness is a friend of mine
I’m used to surviving alone
Tonight I make a promise to myself
I’ll do this on my own!

Sorry its not my best, am feeling angry and upset

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  • 19 years ago

    by confusion

    the anger came across well and the poem fitted well as always. stay strong, im here if you ever needed anyone. hope things are alright, lu -x-x-x-

  • 19 years ago

    by deadnalone

    oh hun, thats a really strong and well written poem, loved it, all except my hand is here if u want it and i no oli's is,
    luv u always,
    please take care,
    ellie
    xoxoxoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    Okay bumweed this is soooo brilliant but sooooo ... boob-like :S

    You are NOT going to get through this on your own muffin, as long as I'm alive at least. I'll do anything and everything in my power to try and help you out munchkin, you know that. Or should know that and if you don't well then that's my fault, but I love you chickadee! I hope this means something to you, but I'm so proud of you for what you've got through. Stay strong darlin, I believe in you.

    Take good care of yourself.
    Always in my thoughts and prayers.
    All my love,
    Laura.

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Its okay hun, lol, even if it isn't your BEST poem, we talked about it before, everyone gets them, especially me. NOT SAYING THAT THIS WAS BAD!!! In fact, it was quite the opposite. I loved it. A LOT!! As of course I do with all of your other poems!!!!!!

    much like me really. You said things in there, that I want to say sometimes. People just aren't reliable anymore. They don't pull through and sometimes they appear to be more self absorbed than care about other people's problems, parent's especially. I don't see mine very often, but I hate them. My mom goes to work early, comes home late, my dad i rarely ever see because he lives in a different state. Happy Sierra lives with her depressing twin (other way around)

    So I know what you're going through.

    WONDERFUL POEM BABE!!!

    ~Sierra

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    xx Thanku