Wonderful, wonderful job.
I loved how you described the anguish and faults of the world and how they effect ourselves and that society has become them. The anger and disappointment you portray in this piece are excellently proclaimed while adding the perfect atmosphere to contribute to the main idea. I espcially admired the lines,
"Trust isn’t serious, its more of a joke
no such thing as a real secret
don’t say a word
unless you want the world to know"
You described that concept and in my opinion, fact, incredibly well.
Excellent job

it's gonna get even crappier, lol,