Love--Doesnt Work

by Kelsey   Mar 15, 2005


Love
A simple four letter word
But means so much more
Just to here those three words,
"I love you" would mean so much.
Being just friends doesn't work out
I cant just be your friend
Smiling on the outside,
Bleeding on the inside,
Knowing...you never felt the way I did,
You never cried the tears like I have,
You never felt the pain you put me through.

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  • 19 years ago

    by melanie

    That was soo deep!! I loved it, and thanx for commenting on my poem, it meant so much........Godbless.....

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    it wont let me :'( WELL okay then if i havn't scared you off then yu can send me one...o.O BOO haha jk...
    ~*Freak*~

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    if you want, not saying you have to, you could read a few poems of mine that are of this exact subject, i think you would relate. i looked at one of your quotes and it seemed to pertain exactly to what had happend to me a while ago. a guy i was in love with and did stuff with dated my best friend instead of me. even if this isnt your situation i can tell you that it does get easier to be friends with them. if you truly loved them then you will always wish them happiness and after a long while seeing them happy and smiling is worth all the tears you cried because you know they would never have been as happy with you and even if that stings a bit, you're just glad to see them happy. okay now that ive written a super long comment on a great poem lol ill just leave the title of those poems i mentioned and let you alone haha. ...except i forgot i was gonna talk to you about..oi im just going to send you a message instead of having this long personal comment for the world to see. haha...
    Trying
    Cause I Looked At You Again
    and She Might As Well Have Him
    lol thats all...now im off to write a "private message" to you. hoping i havnt scared you off with my ranting.
    ~*Freak*~

  • 19 years ago

    by Fragilexheart

    i like this lotzz keep it up
    <3 ya
    Kelsie