Worldly Flaws

by EpithetPoet   Mar 15, 2005


Past the cracked skull
Gleaming through the dirt
Is the story of a girl
Who didnt survive the hurt

Mixing with her blood
Are the worms who thrive
Feasting on the flesh
Of what was once alive

Through all her crimsom tears
She kept her smile bright
Leaving all sins behind
Clinging to what's right

All the laughter and deceit
From those she held dear
Drove her to the very brink
Of shedding her last tear

The labyrinth etched across
The pain marked in blood
Letting her escape the world
Leaving to rest in mud

What she could not help in life
She gave to nature's cause
Leaving behind all her fears
Giving up her worldly flaws

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  • 19 years ago

    by «-Pale-Petals-»

    Mixing with her blood
    Are the worms who thrive
    Feasting on the flesh
    Of what was once alive

    <~ wow that just seemed to jump out at me! excellent job
    5/5
    [[samz]]

  • 19 years ago

    by ŦōüċhÌήğ ỀνĬĽ

    Wow..really awesome poem..deffinatley shivers up my spine! lol Great writting! Keep on writting! Excellent job!
    Shannon:o)

  • 19 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    OOOOHH so chilling. Great poem my friend. Loved it!

    Loving you -

    ;;-- Kalah

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    That sent shivers to my spine!!! I really liked i, a bit creepy!!! but very good!!! Take Care, nice poem!!! MUCH better than mine!

    lol

    ~Sierra

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*LorienElf*~

    wow! excellent excellent poem! i loved it! this was really good, i loved all the descriptions you used and all the comparisons, just really great. i loved how you worded it too. wonderful! keep it up!

    ~*LorienElf*~

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