wow! excellent excellent poem! i loved it! this was really good, i loved all the descriptions you used and all the comparisons, just really great. i loved how you worded it too. wonderful! keep it up!

~*LorienElf*~

That sent shivers to my spine!!! I really liked i, a bit creepy!!! but very good!!! Take Care, nice poem!!! MUCH better than mine!

lol

~Sierra

OOOOHH so chilling. Great poem my friend. Loved it!

Loving you -

;;-- Kalah

Wow..really awesome poem..deffinatley shivers up my spine! lol Great writting! Keep on writting! Excellent job!
Shannon:o)

Mixing with her blood
Are the worms who thrive
Feasting on the flesh
Of what was once alive

<~ wow that just seemed to jump out at me! excellent job
5/5
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