Comments : Heaven is but a Dream

  • 19 years ago

    by CR

    Not bad, not bad at all. But from everything I know, its not what you have done, its what you believe and know as truth.

  • 19 years ago

    by Sarrah

    Really this one is a great one as well. I love the whole thing. It's kinda short though the hole concept of the peom I think you wouldn't have to hard of a time making it longer but I like it the way it is.

    ~~Sarrah