beautifully written, I am so sorry, because I could really feel the pain in your words, keep writing, I thnk it helps to express what we feel in side, please feel free to visit my poems..

WOW, alot of feeling went into this one, absolutely beautiful, made me cry. 5/5

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

That was really sad, I def. give it a 5/5!

Britany, I am really glad that u enjoyed my poems, but i have to say that i am even more grateful i had the opputunity to read urs. Great job! I really felt ur pain in the poem and i am soo very sorry that u and ur sister had to go through that. My condolences.

Very good and it is sad and found it very touching.
Please feel free to visit my poems!!!!!

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Hina

omg I am so sorry! This poem was so beautiful...made me want to cry. I am so sorry for ya'lls loss..Stay strong and take care. This was an awesome poem. <3333