Wandering

by Misstress   Mar 15, 2005


The sun have just shine,
Warmth of the clouds still i can't find
Then thoughts of you begin to bites,
As i take this twisted road for a ride.

This world I've fold is so wicked,
for the smallest chances, i still have to seek
Damn I'm tired of giving up,
Maybe this time I'll just take a nap.

nah...
Maybe it's just hard to dance
To a tune you don't understand
Music fills the air...
Shadows Begin to appear...
As i grab it with my eyes..
Suddenly it disappears.

The depth of confusions never fades
As i turn back another boring page
If given the chance to go back in time
I'll rearrange the words that don't rhyme.

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  • 19 years ago

    by glenda

    a good poem!!!! the readers were able to feel how you feel while doing your poem...

  • 19 years ago

    by xxangelchicxx2000

    luv it. i like this one better then your other one.

    thanks for reading my poems. it means a lot to me. thanks again~!!~

  • 19 years ago

    by Samantha

    "The sun have just shine" doesn't make sense to me..."this" followed by "thoughts" doesn't work because "this" suggests only one thing, "thoughts" is plural. Oh, and "begins" should be "begin".

    Setting aside your grammar, lol, you've got a very understated way of putting your emotions on the paper (or page, I should say). It's really quite refreshing.

    Brush up on your grammar skills, you'll go far.

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    ur poem is unique another good poem check out mine if u would Thnax! I hope u will post more!

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