The day I tried to kill myself pt 4

by SmileeItsBritt   Mar 15, 2005


I'm now lying in a bed
I'm in intensive care
I'm under close watch
I shouldn't be there
My friend comes to see me
She stayed for an hour
Making me laugh
It would have been hell without her
I was up ALL night
Didn't get one minute of sleep
Every hour the nurse came in
And gave me a nasty thing to drink
In a couple days
I was sent to a different place
It was a different hospital
And it was so far away
I stayed there for three days
Crying in my bed
Huddled in the corner
Wishing I was dead
Finally I got to go home
But it didn't fix my pain
It didn't change anything
I'll never be the same

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  • 18 years ago

    by Absolute Broken Perfection

    This is interesting, i like it though, i just hope it wont be like that someday.....

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    wow 4 very intense poems, they are so sad.....They reminds me of the day I tried to commit suicide!! I know exactly how you feel!!! I loved the way they were written in 4 parts, you can't just read one without reading the others.....Just remember you are not alone!!! Take care of yourself, right!!!*hugs*

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