Destroy you

by katie!   Mar 15, 2005


When I see you standing there
Laughing in my face
I wish to strike you down in flames
And have those words erased

You think you are so funny but
You don't know me at all
You laugh because I look like me
You crack up when I fall

I will not break in front of you
And to that I can swear
I will cry and cry every night
But never when you are there

In the end though I will laugh
Because I have now changed
I am depressed and angry
Even a bit deranged

I'll chop you up into pieces
Giggling as you bleed
I'll take you home and roast you up
And on your flesh will feed

Following you home, you sense me there
Although you cannot see
Your footsteps speed along the road
Here you would rather not be

I take my blade, let out a laugh
And come up with my bloodstained knife
And when I hear you start to scream
I cut and take your life

Consealing you in a plastic bag
A chopped up mutilation
Blood is dripping on my floor
You are my new creation

I eat your flesh, I eat it raw
I tear away your skin
I warned you though every day
I told you I would win

*I'm not really a cannibal by the way lol*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Samantha

    Very emotional, but extremely cliched. I've found there is a great definition of cliches and abstractions at www.poetrycoffeeshop.com under the coffeeshop topic-thingamabobber...(lol, don't I sound intelligent?) That is, if you want to improve.

    But I like the vengance you put into your work.

    Overall, and it's only technically that you're not getting a 5, 4/5.

  • 19 years ago

    by Alex

    I told u i would check out ur poems, well done you r really gud at writing, hope you keep up the good work. i gave it a 5!! :D

  • 19 years ago

    by Selfrejected

    killing...ah...the sweet words of killing...

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    i like this one...very darkly written...great job!

    *hugs*

    (lol and its great to know you're not a cannibal)

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    ~ lol~ great poem
    ~ take care, 5! always believe in God ~amit