~ lol~ great poem
~ take care, 5! always believe in God ~amit

i like this one...very darkly written...great job!

*hugs*

(lol and its great to know you're not a cannibal)

killing...ah...the sweet words of killing...

I told u i would check out ur poems, well done you r really gud at writing, hope you keep up the good work. i gave it a 5!! :D

Very emotional, but extremely cliched. I've found there is a great definition of cliches and abstractions at www.poetrycoffeeshop.com under the coffeeshop topic-thingamabobber...(lol, don't I sound intelligent?) That is, if you want to improve.

But I like the vengance you put into your work.

Overall, and it's only technically that you're not getting a 5, 4/5.