by cac123 Mar 15, 2005
category :
Life, society /
about society
We live in a black and white world, |
At certain places it didn't flow so well but i loved the way it ended and seeing i don't live in America it's not my place to comment on that or judge but it still was very interesting. |
by -->>Vicky
nice job...keep it up..check out some of my poems when u get a chance..vicky |
by Dorotea©
Excellent write! I love it...hehe...Its well written, especially the beginning was good. Take care, keep on writing, |
by Gracie Jo
excellent job! i loved it so much! thanks for the comment/vote. it meant a lot! take care and God bless! |
by Red Charm
Good poem and thanks for commenting |