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by pinkalias
I really liked this. You pretty much summed up much of the world's faults and the people which have caused just those. i really like how you displayed a downfall, and added lines that described the bitterness and reality of the world and society as a cold thing that desires nothing beautiful but for itself. I really admired the lines, |
by Red Charm
Good poem and thanks for commenting |
by Gracie Jo
excellent job! i loved it so much! thanks for the comment/vote. it meant a lot! take care and God bless! |
by Dorotea©
Excellent write! I love it...hehe...Its well written, especially the beginning was good. Take care, keep on writing, |
by -->>Vicky
nice job...keep it up..check out some of my poems when u get a chance..vicky |
At certain places it didn't flow so well but i loved the way it ended and seeing i don't live in America it's not my place to comment on that or judge but it still was very interesting. |