wonderful poem...very dark...

Very well written!!....flows well and puts feelings I can't desrcibe into words (you've got a great way with words!). Keep up the good work.

hey great job! i loved it take care it flows awesome!!

Excellent poem! Good job, very good rhymes and flow, a pleasure to read. It was very good! Check out mine when u have time, thx.
Keep up the good work *hugs*

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~