That is a good poem. please comment on some of mine when you have time thanks :)

This was a good poem it reminds me of how I feel about my ex. It mad me cry. Keep writeing more poems and I beleive that you will get over him just like I said theres more fish in thee sea. If you get the chance can you vote on my poem

That was so good, beautiful, love the last line, finished it off well, sometimes the rhyimg sounded abit purposeful, but hey, thats great, thanx for the comment, keep it up xxx