Comments : Just One More Drink

  • 19 years ago

    by Randy Lee

    They say all great artists must suffer....drop me a note if you want.

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I liked this, I found the short lines of one or two words to be really effective because it made the flow, flow, nicely. A dark poem which had a deep meaning behind it of something that i'm sure so many people suffer and deal with everyday in life. I enjoyed reading this. Interesting. Well done. ~Mel