by Tara Mar 15, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
No words to speak to show this pain |
by Melpomene
A deep piece. Beautifully dark. I enjoyed each line of it because it showed much power and depth. The word choice simple I do like your simple word choice but I think you'd work really well with deeper words but either way your poetry turns out good. Well done ~mel |
by Randy Lee
My beautiful dark Tara... Your poems are always so wonderful. I have missed you. |
by Andrea
i love it, great poem! |
by Brookeღ
I really liked reading this poem u can feel the deepness in it as u read. Those r the type of poems I like to read. Another good poem! |