I really liked reading this poem u can feel the deepness in it as u read. Those r the type of poems I like to read. Another good poem!

i love it, great poem!

My beautiful dark Tara... Your poems are always so wonderful. I have missed you.

A deep piece. Beautifully dark. I enjoyed each line of it because it showed much power and depth. The word choice simple I do like your simple word choice but I think you'd work really well with deeper words but either way your poetry turns out good. Well done ~mel