Life Begins

by Lil Luce   Mar 15, 2005


***please take the time to comment and vote and give any advise or criticism, thank you. ***

The moon hangs lazily in the midnight sky,
illuminating the shadows upon her face.
Highlighting the tear drops in her eyes,
as she searches for another place.

Yearning to escape the judgmental glares,
those hurtful jibes and sneers.
Longing to be with those that truly care
and away from all those fears.

As the midnight stars begin to appear,
and glow ever more bright.
An angel wipes away a tear,
as she gets her wings of flight.

She soars through the welcoming air,
with sweet grace and ease.
Not quite believing she is there,
instead of falling to her knees.

As she spreads her magnificent wings
and casts shadows all around.
She hears the other angels sing,
at the peace she has finally found.

The running and fear have now ceased,
no more hiding from the pain.
As she becomes one with peace,
An angel with everything to gain.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    very good poem! I voted a 5 for this one.. keep it up! please check out my new poem "Eternal Sunshine Of The Spotless Mind" it would mean so much to me.. thanks

  • 19 years ago

    by Heathergirl

    VERY WELL WRITTEN I LOVED IT... 5/5

    MUCH LOVE
    ~*~HEATHER~*~

  • 19 years ago

    by Johnny Mac

    Wow, another awesome one, with an amazing flow. 5/5 keep writing girl, you got skillz

  • 19 years ago

    by Aidyn

    Wow...really well done! Awesome job! Oh...thanks for commenting on my stuff as well. A definite 5 from me!

  • 19 years ago

    by confusion

    beautiful write, amazing :) the last line finished the poem perfectly, 5/5. thanks for your comments, always mean a lot :) keep it up and take care always, lu -x-x-x-