by Lil Luce Mar 15, 2005
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
***please take the time to comment and vote and give any advise or criticism, thank you. *** |
by Emilia
very good poem! I voted a 5 for this one.. keep it up! please check out my new poem "Eternal Sunshine Of The Spotless Mind" it would mean so much to me.. thanks |
by Heathergirl
VERY WELL WRITTEN I LOVED IT... 5/5 |
by Johnny Mac
Wow, another awesome one, with an amazing flow. 5/5 keep writing girl, you got skillz |
by Aidyn
Wow...really well done! Awesome job! Oh...thanks for commenting on my stuff as well. A definite 5 from me! |
by confusion
beautiful write, amazing :) the last line finished the poem perfectly, 5/5. thanks for your comments, always mean a lot :) keep it up and take care always, lu -x-x-x- |