beautiful write, amazing :) the last line finished the poem perfectly, 5/5. thanks for your comments, always mean a lot :) keep it up and take care always, lu -x-x-x-

Wow...really well done! Awesome job! Oh...thanks for commenting on my stuff as well. A definite 5 from me!

Wow, another awesome one, with an amazing flow. 5/5 keep writing girl, you got skillz

VERY WELL WRITTEN I LOVED IT... 5/5

MUCH LOVE
~*~HEATHER~*~

very good poem! I voted a 5 for this one.. keep it up! please check out my new poem "Eternal Sunshine Of The Spotless Mind" it would mean so much to me.. thanks