see leah these people love you! haha my birthdays tomarrow! Can't wait!! If you see this before French...I'll see you in French!!!!haha I'm a little hyper right now. We know the only thing i eat is sugar. lol love ya awesome poem
~Britt

Beautiful. That's basically all I can say about this poem. It was beautiful. I loved the flow and the rhymes and everything about it! And I loved the words you used too! Wow, this poem deserves nothing less than 5/5, if you write any more this kind of poems tell me will you?
SatuzKa

This was just downright amazing. It has a deep meaning to it, and I found myself reading it over and over again quite a few times. Keep it up, you really have some talent.

Wow.
The poem is so smooth.
Everylines worth a second to pause.
Youre good, you know u are.

Wonderful poem. It has good rythm and it tells a story. Definitely a perfect poem.

amazing poem!

Wow this was an amazing poem the words u used were perfect I think this has to be one of ur best. I like all ur poems but this one was exellent. I have a few new ones if u could let me know what u think Thanx and Take Care! Brooke

Wow, honestly wow!! This poem really stands out, congratulations, please keep on writing. Awesome poem!!!

WOW..... so dark and creepy.... yet amazingly very loving.... interesting angle and combo... -5
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

wow this is a sophisticated piece

very deep and thought provoking...... not the usual type i read as i noticed its in the dark poems section.. but it was a good read

wow that was brilliant and it must hae taken u ages to do all the rhyming couplets etc! well done 5/5 hope u can check out my work too

(sorry it send) well all i was going to say is take care and keep writing
xxxLoUxxx

i loved it.. "this is our meeting place thrown together and assemble in haste
so that death could not come between"
it reminds me of one of edagr allen poe's poems. i loved the style you used. you're really talented.

Wow, this poem is really good. Very powerful and well written. Keep it up.

Love,
Tiff

wow.. I like this poem very much.. I voted a 5! hugs

Very powerful poem, it touched my heart. This kind of poems are my favorite, keep writing, take care. 5/5 for this poem, no less.
Satuxxa

To say the least i admire your skill

this had wonderful description and it was a great read but it almost seemed an over kill with a final understanding of why and who you were to meet but anyway a good try...

Wow...you did it again!...

There is so much depth to this one, and the rhyming scheme is among the best I've ever seen...It flows perfectly, and your choice of words proved again to be flawless...A poem written with such a skill can never be too long..

Great job...