As You Were Talking

by Heather M Craig   Mar 16, 2005


While you were so tangled up
in your own webs of cheer,
never asking me how I was today
neglecting my emotions were here.

Today was the day you should of listened
and asked me how was my life
instead you went on about silly lust
while blood was pouring from my knife.

Through every delicate smile of yours,
I couldn't bring out my eyes,
I couldn't bear to bring you down
so I just told you "goodbye."

But now I sit, lonely in tears,
letting the pain grow bigger.
As I recap my every emotion,
I'm happy..... as I pull the trigger.

Heather M Craig

--I'm not goin to commit suicide just so you want to know, I'm not selfish like these people I refer to but I had it in mind so ya know?--

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  • 19 years ago

    by ºCrimsonTearsº

    Not all people that commit suicide are selfish. It depends what situation they're in. Great Poem

  • 19 years ago

    by brittany

    i like this it has great emotion behind it.real moving.goodjob luv lotz~.~BRitBRat

  • 19 years ago

    by Lost but Smiling

    Heather, hey it's Rachel it's been a while since we've talked. you know i'm always here incase ya just need to talk.
    God bless and lots of love *hugs*
    ~Rachel~

  • 19 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    I loved it. That was so cool.

  • 19 years ago

    by Child of God

    hey,
    great job that's exactly how i feel right now if not worse V.V for one moment im thinking well as soon as they leave i can get the knife and... wait! no that's crazy! ,but ne ways great poem I can totally relate xoxo keep it up hun - rachel btw 5/5

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