I Will

by The Flame Within   Mar 16, 2005


I will hold you forever in the dark night

i will whisper in your ear that everything is alright

i will tell you how much i love you until we both fall asleep

my love for you is beautiful and makes me want to weep

I will take care of you when our faces are wrinkled and old

i will cover you with blankets and keep you warm when your cold

i will love you for all my life and the life after this

i will love you forever and will seal it with a true kiss

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  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    I re-read this again and I love it. It was beautiful!!! I loved the last line so unbelievably much it sent shivers to my spine. Wonderful poem, hun!!!! I couldn't love it more!!!!

    ~Sierra

  • 19 years ago

    by Ally xo

    hey i thought i would leave yah another comment what a cute poem very creative anyway i am going to go and keep writing some more poems so i can read them i have read all your poems on the sight and guess what? lol none of them r bad they r amazing i wish i could write like u
    anyway ta ta for now xoxo

    Ally

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Yah, Nick. This truly was the sweetest thing I've ever read. And I hope you can love someone with that much passion someday. Almost every girl I know wants what you're offering. Gtg.....on the phone. lyl hun. ttyl bye!!!

    ~Sierra

  • 19 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    beautiful!! very sweet and amazing! keep up the great work
    Ariane
    -xXx-

  • 19 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    Aw... very sweet. you caught me in one of my emotional periods so it brought a tear to my eye. :) Very nice.
    -A

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