Awesome poem Gill. You really have a great flare for writing, and it's great that you can think up so many! It's hard for me to get one out in a whole month! lol. I think u wrote it really well, but it's just I know u to be such a happy person, that I don't know know if you're writing from personal experience. but that might be a good thing, because it's great being so happy.:) lol. Nice work!

~Rach