by Michael D Nalley Mar 16, 2005
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
Virtues come from a loving kind Master |
by TrUtH hUrTs
hmm i liked the over all theme and flow of the poem but i can't help pointing out soe of the rhyming sounded forced..but maybe tht's just me.. |
by Amanda
Thanks for all the comments. Your work is great. :) |
wonderful poem. keep it up |
by Victoria
Very good write it has such meaning! |
by creasy
great poem.. |