Great poem 5/5! Keep it up =)
Please check out my poem and comment and rate it would mean a lot.. thanks, take care Amanda

i've read ur poems and i think they're great its crazy to know that ur not the only lost soul here on earth.

Wow very intense , once again great work =) i really dont know what to say ...it was stunning ,I know how u feel because i can relate to this one. Thats how think sometimes ... but ive learnt to accept that some people have to make mistakes to learn, so being the great sister that you are you wait for her to learn then u comfort her in times of need. Maybe it is that you dont feel appreciated or that youre the only one who cares between both of you but just remember even tho sisters , you are both differet people and different ppl think differently and show their love differently. Even though u feel like uve been replaced , not to worry sisterhood is a very strong bond ..stronger than any other bond and she'll always be there wether u need her or not.Luv muches , cutie