by Natalie84
Holy Moly...that's a bit sad! Very good though!! I loved it!!! 5 of course! |
by Amit
~ beautiful poem, kumar! excellent poem and lovely lines |
by Ann Stareyes
Kumar, Beautiful job and this poem touched my heart. As of a few hrs. ago, all my dreams and love has been shattered. I feel as though my heart has been hit with a lightening bolt. Beautiful write my friend, this one put me to tears. hugs, lol, *Ann* |
by Britt
excellent job, i really enjoyed reading it!! keep it up~ |
by chavii
i got completely lost in ur words so much pain n yet not giving up last hope. |
by Megha
hiiiii!! |
by Nobia
excellent work...surely my inspiration...i like ur style of writing...ur poems flow perfectly...take care n keep writing love ya~ |
by nandini
u end ur poems really well.....gr88 work there. keep writing!!! |
OH MY GOD lol wow well first of all thank you so much for the comment it means heaps and second.... WOW lol this is great seriously! i loved the ryme pattern and it flowed well i loved so many of those verses and could relate alot to it! awsome work completely heartfelt! deserves more den a 5! |
by stephyG
omg...ur poems r fantsic well done!! pls try chok out sum of mine Xoxox stephy |