I Can't Believe This Poem Isn't Already Voted a 5.0 By Over 100 People That Was Excellent 5.0 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

thanx i will look out for that book thank you kelly lin.

lol thanx nikki 4 the praise about the poem

wow, that was amazing well done.

really nice poem...and very heartfelt i can sense ur comapssion for those people in africa....keep up the good work.

can read some of my poetry please ..would mean alot..cheers

this is a great poem! although i thougt it kinda droped us off at the end it didn't have an actual ending thats just what i thought though other than that it a awsome poem keep up the good work!... Check out some of my poems somtime
~Mollie

awww this is really good i like it ill give it........ 5/5! thanx for the comment on my poem and ill ttyl!

much love
xX~savannah~Xx

Wow... great write and message!! props to ya for writing on this topic!! -5
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

Nice job! This was a heart-wrenching poem, and it was very well written. However, it feels unfinished to me. Perhaps add more to it, because it felt like just as I was getting drawn into this story it ended. It's beautiful though. Keep up the great work!

sooo good.. GREAT!! 5/5! please check out my poems "eternal sunshine of the spotless mind" and "pain" please comment/rate it would mean so much to me.. take care from september

Great poem however i being from South Africa can tell you it's not like that everywhere and Sad Kitty says, in rural areas maybe but I must say it's getting better and everyone with Aids in the rural area and cities are being helped in all ways that are possible to help them cope with it and there's lots of things being done to help it like 46664.... Anyways great poem. and thanks for the comment:)

I'll have to say you definitly did a great job on the rhyming and the flow, it was verygood! I also liked the fact that this poem was very original and true. Keep writing, take care.
Satuxxa

THAT IS REALLY GOOD!!!

I love the message portrayed in this poem. Very good job.

Another great poem! You're very talented! 5.0 Mayb u cud check out my poemz one day! Thanx ♥

very powerful message you conveyed it well great job. Keep up the great work...

wow. Your rhymes and simple yet the words capture you. You have a talent for writing!

Wow. Very powerful poem. My Grandma recently went to Africa and is working with world hunger, so she saw a lot of that. She's gotten me into helping too. That was a wonderful poem. I really like your work.
><> Kiesha