I wish

by Amanda   Mar 16, 2005


I wish i was invisible,
so you couldn't see,
all the tears that i cry,
when you're hurting me,

I wish you weren't mean,
every single day,
or weren't so spiteful,
with little things you say,

I wish you were honest,
and not so two-faced,
It's just too bad that,
you've been replaced,

I wish i didn't meet you,
coz you are so mean,
you are the nastiest,
that you've ever been,

You made me cry today,
and didn't even care,
what sorta friend are you,
and do u think it's fair,

I was loyal and honest,
would've been there for you,
This is how you repay me,
by the hurt you do,

I liked you an awful alot,
now you've lost my trust,
Guess what's just happened,
our friendship went to dust.

Copyright 2005 - Amanda Linzi

I wrote this today because my friend made me cry and i miss
the nice person she used to be. please comment thanks :)

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  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    I'm back on this old account and it's great!!!!!! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Hi Amanda

    This poem was a pleasure to read hun :o) I coud relate to it on several levels. A high quality, unique emotional piece well done

    Thanks for your comments to Amanda feel free to email me anytime :o)

    Eirisa

  • 19 years ago

    by JJ

    Awesome job! I wish you all the best. Keep writing!
    -J-

  • 19 years ago

    by Cassie

    wow... i like it... i so totally know how you feel... things went from totally wonderful to a living h*ll overnight... but it took like 4 months and now it's better again... i can only wish the same happens for you...

  • 19 years ago

    by Bret Higgins

    Looks a lot better from my perspective. How does it make you feel now? Are you more satisfied with it?