Jenny greenteeth

Not my best poem but i love the theme and believe strongly in fairies and the fairy world!

For those of you who don't know; a jenny green teeth is a Yorkshire hag who drowns children. please comment and prove my English teacher wrong!!!

matted hair,
evil stare,
hiding in her evil Laire.

waiting for children to appear,
seeking them out,
smelling their fear.

dragging them into her cave,
no one could manage to save,
the lifeless children lying in their watery graves.

so beware,
watch your step,
and know that where you leap,
small children may endlessly sleep!

please comment !!!! it means a lot! n ill return the favor! thanks! xxx