Wow, wow, wow... That was sooooo good. Wowwwwww... Lol. Very good.. I really don't know what to say.

Love you much,
Tiff

The poem so real.
I can feel it.
As if i'm a friend of your soul.

I think you did a great job with that poem, i really liked the idea of writing a poem about your little sister. Beautiful. I bet your little sister loved the poem! I can't give you anything less than 5/5, keep on writing.
SatuzKa

great poem Sherrie =) 5 stars for this one. keep it up! Take Care

Exellent job u can feel ur true feelings as u read this poem! I loved it I am sure ur sister does too! Would u please check out my new on My Blessing Thanx!

wow, that was a beautiful poem, I love the emotions that come through in it.
5/5

wow very beutiful poem..

Your words are so touching and i really felt every one, i really relate , my poems are about my sister too, take a look and youll see why i felt your poem so much.
Doreen

5/5
excellent

that was really good. it was kinda a bit sad, but then again it was kinda happy. it was great. keep it up

"Spinning, arms opened wide
As if to embrace the sunset
A child of sunshine, of innocence"
I love love love LOVE this part! So full of beautiful imagery!
Besides that, this poem, all in all, is just amazing. So....expressive, so sincere....I absolutely love it!

Christa//No Motiv?

Also, thanks for the wonderful comments =)

this is very good I like the whole thought, flow, and sturcture. and yes, you can tell it's from your heart.
great work 5/5

This is great
i can tell it came straight out of your soul

This Was Absolutely Beautiful 5/5! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

good job! i really like this, and i feel exactly the same way about my lil sister (not biologically related, but i still love her all the same)